Silly Little Catfish (writing circle piece 2)

There once was a catfish. He was but a young one, born about five days ago. Then along came mother catfish, who nudged Little catfish to bed. Twas his bedtime. Then along in the night, the fisherman came. With a mighty swing, he cast his line into the pond where the mother and child lived. Having no experience with fishermen, the mother investigated to see what the shiny hook was. Having no hands she bit the hook instead and within but a few seconds, Mother catfish was gone. In the morning Little catfish noticed that the pond was unusually quiet and still. His Mommy was gone. The fisherman then proceeded to catch the silly little catfish and reunite him with his mother at his house, in a fish tank.

If i had one wish. (writing circle piece)

If I had one wish I would probably wish to be a Movie star actor guy. Mostly because they make a lot of money and pretty much get anything they want. Then because of all the money I would have from being an actor, I would buy a mansion with an arcade and a movie theater, even though i have a movie theater in my current house. Any way I would also start my own charity to help the research against every type of cancer ever discovered. Then I would give more money to fighting world hunger. Then again I shouldn't think so far ahead because everyone knows that wishes are fake. But who knows it might happen and it might not.

Creative Piece 2

The Conversation

By: Elias Dorsey

 Elias: Sup

Jerry: Nm hbu

Elias: Same old same old

Jerry: dats good

Elias: Not really

Jerry: ok never mind then

Elias: Your mean

Jerry: What did i do

Elias: Your a loser

Jerry: ur gonna make me cry

Elias: GOOD

Jerry: Sob sob cry sob cry sob :'(

Elias: Haha idiot

Jerry: Ur not funny

Elias: :O *gasp*

Jerry:  JERRY FTW

Elias: ur a bully

Jerry: Ur mom's a bully

Elias: DOUBLE GASP!!!

Jerry: its ur turn to cry

Elias: too late :'(

Jerry: MUAHAHAAAH

Director: That was great. Take five.
Elias: See ya after the break!
Jerry: Okie doke. ill practice

Creative Piece

Wow. Look at you, looking at me to look at yourself. And don’t act like you weren't not confused by what I just said. You people are so full of yourself. All you do is look at yourself. Why not admire me for a change. How would you like it if you sat in one place for as long as I have, and had to look at people trying on clothes, and obsessing over themselves. Its not fun. In fact, I'm jealous. I wish I had been born a table or a window frame but noooo I had to be a reflective surface. Did you know I had dreams too? Emphasis on had. Instead of living my dream as a sailboat captain,  I'm stuck in some chicks room. Not the cleanest room I've ever seen. Also, why is there always a boy coming in through your window? Do your parents know about this mysterious man? If I had arms, legs and a mouth, I would totally tell your dad. What would happen if I did? Would you get in trouble? I would soooo love that. Considering the fact that you totally don’t care about anything if it's yours. I know you can't hear me but did you know you got some major issues? Well you do. You should see a psychologist about that. But I bet he wouldn't listen. Probably because your too whiny and annoying. Which brings me to my final point. You get whatever you want and its not fair! You think I don’t want things? Well I do. Like a scooter or maybe a nice bike. Which doesn't make sense because I don’t have limbs. Wait a second. What are you doing with that Windex and towel? NOOO. Wait. Your cleaning me! You know what, I may just be a mirror but your not that bad!

GARBOLOGY

Once upon a time there was a lone toothpick. His family was killed my the infamous Q-tip. He swore his vengeance against the Q-tip. Until one day he totally had a huge epic battle with a long green snake called aleshnashna. The victor was very unclear until the snakes head fell off. For no random reason. It just magically fell off like plop. I was all like whoa dude that was pretty dang rock-in. At that exact moment Q-tip came out and said "your coming with me" and Toothpick said nuh uh uh. Can't Touch this dun dun dun dun. dun dun. dun dun. Can't touch this. But by then he already touched it. Then they had an even epic-er battle and I was all like dude what happend and he was like. I won

When I look in the mirror im happy to see. That no one is nearly as hot as me. Im blazing, combbusting and firey its true. My powers of fire will be your waterloo. Doenst make sense? Soon you will see the wrath, the hate, and the power of me. 

Hundredth Dove response

The Hundredth Dove response

Would you break a promise to a person you were obligated to serve? Or would you stay loyal and do as you were told? In the story “The Hundredth Dove” by: Jane Yolen, A man has to catch one-hundred doves for the kings wedding. The story starts off by introducing the main character, Hugh. He is a man that, I think, makes the best of what he has. He barley has anything, but he remains loyal to his master, The King. As I was saying, the story starts in a dreary tone. Like in an old horror movie, this made me wonder.
It made me ask myself, what can I pick off from what I’m reading now, to predict what would happen in the story farther into it. The reason being is because I like to make a list of options in my head about what could happen, what would possibly happen, and what will happen. The fact that it revealed everything right away, made this very easy for me to do. For example, I knew that he was going to complete his task at all means necessary because, in the second paragraph it explains how loyal he is to his king and also how he is a very skilled fowler.
Even the most skilled athletes and workhorses have bad luck. In the fourth paragraph, the author explains that he set out to catch as many doves possible in one day. The white dove slips out of the net and flies away. This is where I got the idea that the queen can turn into a dove because the same way the author described the queen as slim and fair, was the same way they described the white dove. That’s when I started to piece together the puzzle of the ending.
I guessed that the dove was magical when they said mythical creatures walked by him on the same day he caught and killed the white dove to complete his “chore.” Such as a hippocampus, gryphon, and unicorn, and before he killed it, she offered him three things. That’s when I knew what was going to happen exactly. I knew he killed the queen when there was no wedding figured out what was going to happen in the end before I read the end.
When it’s all said and done, the story was intriguing and the plot was creative. I liked the story a lot, but I was expecting more depth from such an attention getting story. Such as, more of a plot, and not such a rushed ending. In all honesty though I loved the book and I’m behind Hugh all the way on his decision.