Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Once Upon a Time

Jimmy was doing is homework, trying not to think how much he hated homework. In the math class, he was getting an F+. If he didn't his grades up his mom wouldn't let him play baseball. He thought no baseball was too brutal of a punishment for him to handle. His mom was wondering how he would use baseball is his life. He raised his grades to get an A+. Then he failed again. Then he got reincarnated as a bunny. He hopped around, kicking his math teacher in the face with his bunny feet and paws. Then he ate carrots. While he was eating carrots the Po Po came and arrested her evil math teacher. Who is the math teacher? Ms. Robert Wagner.
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2 comments:

  1. Zach TFebruary 22, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    I liked the idea of the story a lot. You had a couple grammar and punctuation mistakes but other then that I thought it was very nice.

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  2. Bailey K.March 10, 2011 at 7:29 AM

    That was very funny i didnt supesct alot of the stuff thats what made it a good creative write

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